A wild ride of angst, guilt, and revenge told in a very graphic and twisted style– definitely not for the faint of heart. It is often difficult to follow, but fascinating at the same time. The author has written in an almost stream-of-consciousness manner – as if the story HAD to be told, and damn the usual conventions of writing.
With that being said, I believe the author would still benefit from an editor. I think a better flow would make it even more horrifying and compelling, but the raw talent of this author is very evident. I’d give the story five stars, but am taking one star off for the editing issues.