am 17. November 2015
I'll tell you straight off, I couldn't read through this poorly written piece. It reads like something from a middle-school student first learning to write. Pedantic, simple style and completely free of excitement. Put me right to sleep and after the thrid try, i decided not to torture my grey cells and moved on.
Just skip it, unless you are a young teenager, when it may well prove fun. You could learn how not to write.