I like the story so far, introducing all the characters with their different abilities - but please get an editor and run the spellcheck program on your computer. And stick to one tense. Either past or present. That's a real speedbump. I want my money back, at least for this book.
Normally I don't write reviews. But, I like the story and of course Ell :-) The story has IMHO a very smooth flow and ist not so predictable wen it comes to science. If you are interested in these kind of stories you should start with (obivously) story #1 should not have read any of these stories.
Please write a lot more books (maybe longer too?) I will buy them all. Keep up the good work.