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Fifty Shades Worse...,
Rezension bezieht sich auf: Fifty Shades Darker: Book Two of the Fifty Shades Trilogy (Taschenbuch)
I got the 3 volume boxed set - that's the only reason why I read on.
The story goes on - right where the last one ended. But that's not the problem. The story has potential. It's really the writing that suffocates the story.
Ana's inner goddess and her subconscious should just be deleted from the book. Okay... there'd only be approx. 60% of the book left - but would that be so bad?? I don't think it would.
Delete Christian's shy smiles (and Ana's too while you're at it) and you're left with 50%. Bad? No, not at all!
Ana forgets to eat.. every five pages. The reader doesn't need to be reminded of that so often. Away with it! Ana flushes - Christian thinks it's adorable and I bet it is. But I don't want to read that twice per page (that's a lot of flushing considering how many pages there are) Down to 40%.
Intimate scences: How often do they do it? Average 5x a day, every day? Who wants that (on a permanent basis)??? Skip a few and we're down to 20%.
Last, but not least: Christian's self doubt ("I'm not worthy. I'm nothing. I'm a worm." and similar grouching) and Ana's way to build up his esteem ("Don't say that. You ARE a nice person.") - leave it out!
What's left is a decent short story I would very much enjoy.
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Ersteintrag: 21.12.2013 19:16:13 GMT+01:00
Theodoros Goumas meint:
and then there are repetitions like: he cocks his head to one side, etc.
What a booooooring read! What a waste of time!
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