This book is very poorly written. It seems as if there may a language barrier - or as if it was translated poorly. I do not quit a book once I start (I cannot think of another time other than a Harry Potter book...). This one I stopped. It was that bad.
It was not edited. I am unsure if a spell check was even done. I am excluding the dialogue for I believe the writer was going for a certain type of "speak." Maybe ebonics or gang rap stuff. Not sure. But the dialogue - while difficult to understand - seemed fitting for the characters.
The story may be a good one. I cannot know for I could not finish to see.
The author switched between first person, third person limited and third Peterson omniscient. Very confusing to try to jump about like that. Editorialized a lot.
Some was stilted and ill-fitting (finished his hygiene - who says /thinks that?).
The scenes had some conflicting data (upstairs - then out in living room - then finishing hygiene without going downstairs/upstairs, etc.)
This is a NOT recommended for the reasons stated above. There are others, but I have said enough.
The writer should get an editor and a writing partner to go over this manuscript. It needs scrubbing, character development, plot and scene structure. Seriously, I THINK there may be a good tale in there. It just needs polishing to be offered to the public. I got it free. I would ask for a refund for any price paid.