am 28. Mai 2014
Wonderful lovestory, lovely and authentical characters, good dialogues and a believable development. All that spiced with suspense and drama and lots of danger for all the good guys.
Could have been five points, but the endless more or less making out sessions in the beginning were too much. I'd liked to read something about Cam settling in his new life - not only his life in the diner. Him getting to knoe Matt and Julian, settling in the house, re-learning a normal every day life. Instead it's one half-assed dialogue between the soon-to-be couple after another, always combined with a bit or even more kissing in the cafe with its clients or sometimes in the backroom.
But after the beginning it is fantastic! And really nice that there's no hastily constructed HEA, but a logical development to coupledom and happiness. For those who appreciate a good style and hate typos: don't worry! That aspect is perfect, too.