am 3. Juni 2014
Yes, there's lots of dramatic moments and suspense. And yes, the MCs are not stupid, even nice. But the gossiping is neither funny not sympathetic, it's just irritating and the gossiping characters horrible. And why is it that there's lots of promising moments but the story stays superficial and shallow all the time? After a third I skipped the boring musings and inner thoughts of the MCs completely. Half the book would have been more than enough. The story seems lifeless, without spirit and though the MCs are nice enough less whining and tears would have been a big plus.
Two points for nice MCs and a idea (though horrible realisation) and the fact that there are not too much typos.