Maybe I was expecting too much, I don't know. I liked the previous three books, in climbing order, with really loving City of Glass. When I heard there would be a fourth book I had the utmost faith in Clare that she wouldn't just throw in more books to continue on a finished story line if there wasn't an even better story to tell, with at least some heart in it. In truth, I feel very disappointed after finishing City of Fallen Angels, having to face that this is a perfect example of why you should never beat a dead horse; that you're better off leaving the characters to live further in the minds of the readers instead of trying to revive them for the sake of' of what, really? Sure, if you've been writing characters you've grown to love, if you created a story world that you think holds more potential, I can understand it is really hard to resist the call for more. But seriously, I think not giving into that call would have been the wisest decision to make here.
Let me begin with the story and the plot, because these are essential in a book I'd think. The story was fairly none existent for about three quarters of the book, because there was hardly any plot to push the story forward. Jace and Clary and their teenage angst and whining is not plot unless you want to write a cheesy Harlequin version of Downworld, meaning there really was no need to drag it on endlessly.
Then, what little plot there did was, was merely hinted at: something terrible was happening, but it all happened off the pages and was brought up only on occasion and handled by Maryse en the Clave ' again, mostly off the pages ' with the exception of Jocelyn's hospital visit. This might be taken for the writing of mystery and suspense, but really, shouldn't the rest of the book then have been more about actually solving the mystery, not about solving relationships?
Talking about relationships, if I had been able to choose which one I'd have to endure reading about, I think Alec and Magnus' holiday experiences would have been more interesting to read anyway; I was happy when those two finally came back into the story near the end, to again be saddened about how Alec was written. Why of why the jealous fits? Alec seemed like a smart guy to me, he can read people or so was written somewhere, surely he would have figured this out on his own before he was confronted with it like that, so he could react with some more dignity. Then, Alec and Izzy are in the middle of a crisis but he starts asking questions about Magnus' love life? I mean, seriously?
And after all those pages upon pages of woe and tension (without heart or emotion), there is the climax, which was hastily thrown in and with little to no elements that were really a surprise to me.
There were character errors and inconsistencies, plot holes, endless descriptions about what everyone was wearing and how tired and bewildered and strained they all looked, told from multiple points of view on top of all else. Pretty amateuristic is all I can say about that.
The character that came out best to me, and even he wasn't without error, was Simon - especially in those scenes where it was him and Jace (these were about the only scenes where I could stomach Jace, actually; for the rest he was acting more and more like Edward Cullen *shudder*), I liked Kyle as a new character, too, until he started focussing too hard (better, only) on Maya.
The one reason I'm giving City of Fallen Angels two stars, and not one, is because I remember I was the least impressed with the first of the original TMI trilogy, and there is still hope that also this trilogy will grow on me and will turn into something epic after all. And because I have read worse as well (but not much).
I wished I could have written a more positive review, because I really had hoped for a stunning continuation of this series; but I can't. :(