I really wanted to love this book. As evidence of such, I will tell you that I pre-ordered it. I was quite excited when it finally arrived and started reading immediately.
Within the first 15 pages, however, my excitement morphed into extreme disappointment, and even some incredulity. As some other reviewers have mentioned, the writing/editing is startlingly poor. As I happened across the first few errors, I just dismissed them as those little oversights that seem to find their way into even the best edited works. But then, the errors kept on coming. So much so that my ability to enjoy the story was seriously compromised. I struggled on to about page 75, and called it quits.
I don't mean to be overly harsh. I was not expecting a literary masterpiece. Just something as capable and passionate as, say, a Jim Bolus (Derby Dreams)or Steve Haskin (Tales from the Triple Crown Trail)type of work. But this was not even close.
Again, I wanted to like the book, as I collect books on all the racing greats, and I looked forward to adding a book about Affirmed to my collection. Now, I just appreciate the cover and the pictures inside, but more or less dismiss the contents as being at best pedestrian. I even wondered if perhaps something had happened to Mr. Sahadi: Had he been some kind of great writer who through some unfortunate twist of fate had lost his writing skill? Was this book published more out of respect for him, than for its content?
I feel terrible ripping this book. Perhaps if they really went through it and edited it properly, the story could take shape and hook the reader as it should and no doubt would. Why not try that for the second edition?